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Danes983

Which one do you laides like?

They will be printed on cream paper so ignore the stark white. And the one with the watermark wont be in gray it will be faint behind in a cream. I know you can see our last names. Please feel free to stalk away. LOL

rosierose914

I like the middle one.  It adds a little something without going overboard.  

smw42

I find the font to be way too small in porportion to the white space. The 2nd option reads as a menu to me and not an invite. I'd play around with the type face a little more.

stephweinstein

I agree with PP - they look slightly menu-ish.

However, I think the script watermark is stylish and I haven't seen anything like it before. 

wagnerdi

I really like the watermark one, being that the colors won't be as harsh...but I agree w/ PP, the font is way too small...

Shand18

I agree with PPs- on the looking menu-ish. 

I like the first one.  I like the watermark in gray (or in some other faint color) to break-up the empty space. 

With the inserts, I'm not crazy about how they don't take up the whole pocket-space.  I don't know if they should be taller, or if there should be something else there.  I have no idea what would be appropriate though. 

cvl105

I like the first one best.  Maybe try different sized font for your names. I did that to break it up a bit and stand out.

jaimelody

Ditto CLV - I like when people use different fonts for your names. Although the first one is my fav and I don't know if that will throw it off. Maybe just bold and larger for the names and try grouping the invite text togther so it's not spread out? I really like the watermark. If it's not grey what color will it be?

Danes983

Thanks ladies.  The watermark will be cream. You will just see faint lines of it on the invite so it will be there, but not so in your face to take away from the actual invite text.  I took your advice and grouped some wording together and I do like it a lot more. I also will increase the font.  I am trying to do this all in word right now since I am at work. I am not that good at this stuff so I am trying my hardest.
Thanks again for the advice.  I asked this in my post below but no one answerd yet.. do you think I could use the smaller size response card without an envelope?  That was my original plan.

smw42

I think when we all responded to the RSVP we were responding based on using an RSVP sized envelope. I'm really not sure how it would work as a post card, and your invitation person may be correct that to be mailed without an envelope it needs to be larger.

felicia220

I think that if you are going to do the smaller RSVP card then you need an envelope, the post office might not let you mail something w/o an envelope unless it is postcard size, I would check on that.   

Oh and I like the 1st and 2nd one

kristen8040

I like the first one!

sk2342

I like the middle version because the logo complements the boxy bold headers of the items in the pocket. I also agree with the other comments to really play with fonts and color to make things pop. So far they look great. I am actually workin on my as we speak too! instead of working lol...

akmackay

I like the first one- but it needs some work like pps say.

TuffysMommie

I would definitely play around with the fonts for your names - Chelsea's are a great example. It also bothers me that the fonts for the invites are fairly formal and then the cards for "accommodations" and whatnot are in a sans serif plain font. They don't match and it throws off the look of the invites as well.  If you have already printed the extra cards, then have your invites in the same "non formal" look.

The two just need to match -well, not match, but at least be in the same style. (again, Chelsea posted a good example of that as well.)

kwilkinson14

I like the first option as well. I do agree with what others have mentioned to change.