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Bridal shower wording help

Danes983Danes983 member
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Hi ladies, I need some creative help.  Planning a Kentucky Derby themed bridal shower for my friend.  Here is what I have. Tell me what you think and please suggest anything better.

Please help us shower XXX Kentucky Derby style as she races to the finish line of marriage!

Sat May 5, 2012 3:00 in the afternoon

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In true tradition of the Kentucky Derby please wear your best Derby hat and dress.

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Re: Bridal shower wording help

  • NJhousewife22NJhousewife22 member
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    edited December 2011
    I think it's cute! 

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  • gina613gina613 member
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    edited December 2011
    I think it's cute, but I'd probably say "races to her wedding day"... "finish line of marriage" seemed a liitle weird but that's just my opinion. Really cool theme though!
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  • akcrrrakcrrr
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    edited December 2011
    I agree with Gina "races to her wedding day" sounds happier. What a cool idea! 

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  • goaliegirlgoaliegirl member
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    edited December 2011
    I am going to be very honest here..while I think it is a cute idea for the theme...I would hate it if I got an invite and it asked me to wear a hat and fancy dress to a shower.   I hate wearing hats and I would hate to go out and buy something to wear for one day for a shower.    So, my suggestion is to not ask people to please wear a dress/hat as if at the Kentucky Derby.   Maybe ask people to wear it if they would like to.   The way you have it worded makes it sound like you really want people to come like that and I would feel obligated to figure something out.

    Like I said, it is a cute idea, just don't like how that last line is worded
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