Invitation wording (printing them up today)

femmepink

My invitations are DIY.

I am using pocketfolds, so I have three insert cards and one main card on the inside fold of the invite. Can you girls read this over and tell me if the wording sounds proper?

INSIDE MAIN INVITE:

Kerry L___ V___
and
David P__ H____

together with their parents
invite you to share
in their happiness
as they unite in marriage
on Saturday, the thirty-first of March
two thousand twelve
at two thirty in the afternoon

Address


RECEPTION INSERT CARD:

Reception (fancy font)

please join us for a
RECEPTION (fancy font)
at five thirty in the
afternoon

cocktails ,dinner, dancing

address

RSVP INSERT CARD:

RSVP (fancy font)

the favour of your
RESPONSE (fancy font)
is requested on or before
the second of March

Name(s)________
__will be attending
__will not be attending

please indicate any dietary requirements on the
reverse of this card


HOTEL & SHUTTLE INSERT CARD:

HOTEL & SHUTTLE (fancy font)

HOTEL ACCOMODATIONS (fancy font)

address
phone number
please quote block ID: VHW
to receive group block rates

SHUTTLE SERVICE (fancy font)

will be provided to and
from the reception for
the hotel guests

rebeccaa12

I think the wording looks great. I think that for me personally, because I cant visualize the font/sizing, it looks a little odd to me that 'please' isn't capitalized:

Reception (fancy font)

please join us for a
RECEPTION (fancy font)
at five thirty in the
afternoon

That also goes for the RSVP part 'the favour...'

Maybe that's just me. Again, I can undrestand the font and sizing may look different once you have it laid out. The wording looks great thought and has a very formal appeal to it.

femmepink

Yeah, the actual font that we used takes care of the capitalization. But I will look at it again to make sure it looks proper.

Thanks so much for taking the time!!

rebeccaa12

Absolutely! I figured. On my invites, they were all like a gothic capital font, so when I copied and pasted, all came out lowercase. If I capltilized, there was a big space. Wierd.

Rock on- one step closer to having that check done