Invitation Mock up PIP

jezpez717

So we will be doing a square pocketfold, so most of the info will be in the little things on the side, this will be the image in the center of the pocketfold

The outter part is made to match the "tile" pattern envelope liner from cardsandpockets

mamameech

fun style - i really like it

BMcLeodTeam

I agree, its really fun

entropicbeauty

Are you looking for critiques/opinions or just posting to show us what you have?

jezpez717

critiques please.. The design is bigger than it will be, and I think were gonna take the font down to only grey and orange since the pocketfold and design will be navy.. and possibly change the cursive to the other font

morenachica110

I really, really love the design! The only thing I would change is the "together with their families" down through "invite you as they" seems really squished and like it doesn't fit. Like it's stretched out. Does that make sense?

celticmyss

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[QUOTE]critiques please.. The design is bigger than it will be, and I think were gonna take the font down to only grey and orange since the pocketfold and design will be navy.. and possibly change the cursive to the other font
Posted by jezpez717[/QUOTE]

<div>I think this is a good idea. I really like the general idea but it just seems a tad busy with all the different fonts and colors. Other than that I really like it! </div>