I just want a proofread of wording before I move ahead and start working with fonts for our DIY invites. 
Mr. and Mrs. John Doe
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
Pamela Rae
to
Mr. Spencer Michael
son of
Mr. and Mrs. John Smith
Saturday, the Fifteenth of December
Two thousand and twelve
at eleven o’clock
Venue
AddressCity, State, Zip
Directions
(insert map)
Directions from Pennsylvania via Route 78.
Insert Directions.
Accomodations
A block of rooms has been reserved for your convenience at
Hotel NameCity, State, ZIp
Response Card:
The honor of your response is requested by November 15, 2012.
Name of guests ___________________________
___ Wouldn’t miss it for the world
___ Will celebrate from afar
I promise to dance if you play
_______________________