Wedding Invitations & Paper

Please help me proof my wording!

Hi girls, I was wondering if you could look over my invite wording for me.  I wasn't sure on the punctuation or capitalizing.  I'm completely designing the invite myself, so I wanted the wording totally unique and fit to us.  Please let me know what you think and should change!  :)

DW INVITE:

Hookahi Makamaka O Ko Aloha
Our love begins the union of our life together


It is with great joy that
Dad and Mom Awesome
invite you to join them
barefoot on the beach in Maui as

My first and middle
and
FI's first middle and last

Join hand in hand,
declaring their love for one another,
leaving their footprints in the sand
on Saturday, the eighteenth of June
two thousand eleven
At nine o'clock in the morning
Paipu Beach, Makena, Maui, Hawaii

Brunch Reception to Follow


AHR INVITE:

Hookahi Makamaka O Ko Aloha
Our love begins the union of our life together



My first and middle

and
FI's first middle and last

will exchange vows barefoot in the sand
in an intimate ceremony on Makena Beach, Maui

on their fourth anniversary together

in June two thousand eleven.

It is with great joy that
Dad and Mom Awesome
invite you to join

in celebrating the newlyweds
immediately following their honeymoon

on Saturday, the second of July
two thousand eleven

at six o'clock in the evening

Hotel
Address



For the wedding websites, I'm going to have a separate card insert, but I'm unsure of the wording for it.  Something simple like: For further details about the wedding, please visit our wedding website.

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