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Wedding Invitations & Paper

Wedding Invite

We are just in the beginning stages of figuring out our invites but with only a month or so till we need to send them out, it is also the end, i just wanted your opinions on how this sounds, we are hosting our own wedding. Please give me feedback/tips if something doesn't sound correct.

Miss Jamie Lee (Last Name)
and 
Mr. Jeremy Kevin (Last Name)
invite you to share in their love
and happiness as they exchange
their vows and begin their 
new life together
at 5 o'clock in the afternoon
on Friday, the 31st of August, 2012
at (hotel, city, Arizona)

*Cocktail hour and reception, immediately following.

I also need help with RSVP card wording, if anyone has any suggestions. We will be having a plated meal with 2 options, I would like 3 and we may be able to get a third, I am just working against the hotel's table because they are also our caterers!

Thank you so much for all of your help! You all are my saving grace!
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Re: Wedding Invite

  • WIll it hurt feelings to not have parents mentioned at all? I would keep the wording you have, but add "Together with their families" at the beginning.

    But I'm kind of hopeless people-pleaser, and you are well within your rights to not mention anyone else :)
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  • I guess i didn't think about that, I open to discussing them as well but I am not completely sure if i am, my whole family lives in Minnesota so they are not helping with the wedding planning in any way shape or form, and Jeremy's Dad's wife is helping but if we mention them and don't mention his mom who i have to BEG to get me any wedding information from I would be in for hell so I feel like it is easier to just keep it simple and just us, who is paying for the entire wedding ourselves.
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