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Help me choose my invitation wording please...

We have narrowed it down to these 2, but we still can't decide.  Help us decide please!!!  TIA (these are not my words:  #1 is from versit.com and #2 is from invitationconsultants.com)

#1

His love is the sunshine
that keeps me warm
To me, she's the rainbow
after the storm
His love gave me wings
it has set me free
And wherever she is
that's where I want to be
We invite you to be with us
as we begin our new life together
on
October Second
2010
at
Two O’clock 
M  Lake
Address
M, New York

Jennifer and Joseph

or

#2

As the autumn leaves begin to turn
Two lovers choose to say I do
A promise made and shared with you
to love, to laugh, to live, to learn 
Jennifer
and
Joseph
invite you to witness
the ceremony of their marriage
on Saturday, the second of October
two thousand ten at three o'clock in the afternoon
place
M, New york

Re: Help me choose my invitation wording please...

  • i really love #1, mainly because you're asking your guests to "be with us" rather than simply asking them to witness your wedding vows.  i think it's nice to imply that your guests are part of the ceremony rather than just an audience to it. i also personally prefer the less formal wording of #1.

    v.


  • I agree with above, I think the whole "invite you to witness the ceremony..." of #2 is more stiff than "invite you to be with us as we..." of #1, but I love the way number 2 starts....they're both really nice and at least you have two great options.
  • Are you sure you can even fit that much text on an invitation??

    Honestly, I'm not a huge fan of either.  They're just extra-wordy IMO.

    If you opt for #1, remember that invitations need to be worded in the 3rd person.
  • I like #1 the best out of these
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