Please - help Proof I think I am ready to aprove my invites

EastSideBlonde

Hi Ladies - Thank you for all the posts & tips I think i am finally ready to approve mine but of course I want to check one more time...
 
here are the invites - my font will be all black and my contrast envelope liner will be yellow...

Not sure it the  fonts & centering format will hold... Let me know if any thing should be revised

Invitation Verse:

A story about a time, a story about a place, a story about two people,                                            
But above all things, a story about love…. 

Danielle Xxxxx Xxxxxx
and

Ivan Xxxx

 

request the honour of your presence

at their marriage

on Thursday, October eleventh

Two thousand twelve

at four o’clock in the afternoon

Site

at Venue

Town, Pennsylvania

 

Reception immediately following

Accommodations: 

Accommodations 

 Venue Country Inn 
(570) 123-4567
http://www.Venue.com 

Please mention the Bride/Groom blockwhen calling to make reservations. 
For more information please visit
http://xxxxxxxxxxx.ourwedding.com

Response wording: 

Please respond on or beforeSeptember 10, 2012  M_______________________Please indicate number of each:  _____ Sliced Tenderloin of Beef and Lobster Tail _____ Woodland Chicken_____ I have a dietary restriction_____ Regretfully Decline

EastSideBlonde

Thank you ladies - I had really thought using the Venue's Invitation process would insure the correct wording & format since they do this for a living - guess not... going to make one final update & send it off Thank you!!