Wedding Invitations & Paper

Invitation Proof--help please PIP

I just got a proof from the girl doing our invitations. I feel like something is missing, but can't put my finger on it. 


^^the link will take you to a picture of it and a link to DL the PDF. I tried posting a picture of it on my club board and it was too small.

For clarification, this will be double sided, and fairly large. The invitation will fold up and have a tear off RSVP card. The invite will act as the inner envelope. She hasn't started on the back, but the map will be on the back. Pinwheels are a main concept of the wedding. We are wanting a modern, vintage, whimsical feel. Our colors are canary yellow and charcoal grey. 

The portion with the illustrated pinwheels will be covered by a 3'' x 3'' piece of patterned cardstock. This will be used by guests to make their own pinwheel to wear to the wedding. 

TIA!
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