Wedding Invitations & Paper

Help me proof, please!

Hi ladies-
So I'm spazzing-- my Etsy seller is MIA, and I'm already REALLY late in getting my invites out. I'm just going to order them from Zazzle (beginning w/ a small order at first to make sure they're ok since they don't do proofs).

 I'm kinda clueless, so I'm hoping someone with a good eye can make sure I'm not commiting any major faux pas's. Any advice/comments/feedback would be so helpful:

Together With Their Parents

Bride’s Name

and

Groom’s Name

Invite You to Share in Their Wedding Ceremony

and Celebration on the Beaches of Mexico

Saturday, the Eighth of May, Two Thousand Ten

At Eleven O’Clock in the Morning

Moon Palace Golf Resort and Spa

Cancun, Mexico

Reception to Follow

Vacation

Re: Help me proof, please!

  • Too much random capitalization. Only capitalize a word if it's at the beginning of the sentence!

    Together with their parents

    Bride’s Name

    and

    Groom’s Name

    invite you to share in their wedding ceremony

    and celebration on the beaches of Mexico

    Saturday, the eighth of May
    two thousand ten

    at eleven o'clock in the morning

    Moon Palace Golf Resort and Spa

    Cancun, Mexico

    Reception to follow

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  • Thank you for the feedback, apple_green! That is helpful advice.
    Vacation
  • The "on the beaches of Mexico" part is awkward to me.  I'd stick with more standard wording. 
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