Can i get some suggestions on how to "cleanup" our invitation intro?
I appreciate all your insights!!
here's our situation (formal):
1. My parents are both helping & divorced, only my father is remarried.
2. His parents are both deceased, we both want to have them included, both out of respect and actual contribution they left behind.
3. We want to be the main hosts because we are footing a large portion of the bill (about 40%)
this is what we have so far:
Natalia Sxxx
and
Jiries Zxxx
Together with their Parents
Mrs. (maiden last) Sxxx
and
Mr. and Mrs. Galo Sxxx
and the late
Mr. and Mrs. Nadim Zxxx
Request the honor of your Presence.....