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Invitation wording help

kmc1109kmc1109
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Hi ladies! I haven't been on in a while, but I could use your expertise!!We just got the proof back for our invitations and I'm stuck on this one part.Together with their parents,Krystal Last NameandMychal Last NameInvite you to share in the joy as they exchange marriage vowsThe whole invite you to share in the joy sounds funny to me....should it be "their" joy?? Thanks!
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Re: Invitation wording help

  • peridoticparadoxperidoticparadox
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    edited December 2011
    i think "in their joy" sounds better or just "share the joy"does this help!
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  • ggmaeggmae member
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    edited December 2011
    We wrote: Together with their parents Bride's Full Name & Groom's Full Name Request the pleasure of your company as they are united in marriage. Date Time Place ---------- I didn't like the "joy" wording either, so we skipped it. If you want something more formal, you can do "honor of your presence" instead.
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  • banana468banana468 member
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    edited December 2011
    Why not go with ggmae's version? 
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  • kmc1109kmc1109
    10 Comments
    edited December 2011
    I just prefer the joy line...I'm just going to go with their joy.Thanks!
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