Wedding Invitations & Paper

how does this sound?

under the desert sky and the lights of las vegas
 chelsea and gerall
wish for the honor of your company as they take the trip of a lifetime by uniting in marriage

Re: how does this sound?

  • Personally I'm not a fan of cutesy poems on wedding invites.
     
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  • I like the first line a lot :) The only change is I would say "request the honor of your presence" instead..
  • yeah we ended up changing it 

    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-boards_invites-paper_how-does-this-sound-1?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20BoardsForum:cd062f89-8272-496a-b0ab-225e1f87acecDiscussion:eeeeb0da-5698-4784-b077-ac73f76310b8Post:1871a937-5668-4097-ad03-0ac240e5af19">Re: how does this sound?</a>:
    [QUOTE]I like the first line a lot :) The only change is I would say "request the honor of your presence" instead..
    Posted by ksblumb[/QUOTE]
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