Would you guys mind checking my invite wording for any grammar/etiquette/spelling errors? I posted in Invitations and Paper and didn't get much response. FYI, the wedding is formal but not in a church. The placement of FIL's names are to recognize them, they are not co-hosting. Thanks!!
Invite:
Mr. and Mrs. Bob Peter Smith
request the pleasure of your company
at the wedding of their daughter
Mary Jane
to
Mark Edward Jones
son of
Mr. and Mrs. Dumbledore Aberforth Jones
Saturday, the twenty-first of September
two thousand thirteen
at half past six o'clock
(Location Name)
(Location Address)
(Location City, State)
Reception immediately following
Accomodations:
(Hotel Name)
(Hotel Address)
(Hotel Phone)
A block of rooms has been reserved for our guests at a special rate. Please reference the Smith/Jones wedding when making your reservations. Kindly reserve your room by August 1, 2013.
RSVP card:
The favor of a reply is requested by the seventh of September
M____________
___Accepts with pleasure
___Declines with regrets
___Duo of Beef and Chicken
___Vegetarian Entree