Proof Please

Re: Proof Please

• libby2483 member

  

  April 2012 edited April 2012

  Your wording sounds great overall.  I would just make a few changes with capitalization (you don't have to capitalize at the start of every line) and writing out the time.  Based on what I have read on these boards before, you only want to use "the honor of your presence" if you are getting married in a church (I'm not sure if "The Chapel" is a church or not).  Otherwise, you should use "the pleasure of your company".  Honestly, most guests probably wouldn't know the difference, but if you want to be a stickler for etiquette, that is what is recommended.
  Mr. and Mrs. Thomas                                
  request the honor of your presence
  at the marriage of their daughter
  Stephanie Kaye
  to
  Kellan Gaines                      
  Friday, the twenty-fourth of August
  two thousand and twelve
  at half past seven o'clock in the evening

  
  The Chapel
                                                
                                                
  Reception to follow
  
  The RSVP card:
  Kindly respond on or before
  the twenty-third of July
  M                                          
        Wouldn't miss it for the world
         Will celebrate from afar
  Number of Attendees         

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• VNEluvsAJB member

  

  April 2012

  I agree with PP. Make sure you have someone else double check the spelling of names before you complete the order.

  

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• saraschilling88

  

  April 2012

  I like your wording, and unless you are going super formal, I wouldn't mind leaving it as 7:30 instead of half past seven..  Just my opinion!!

  

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