Proof Please

KSParker2012

Yay! I think I am all settled on my invitation, "enclosure" and RSVP wording but will you please proof read it to make sure it all looks good? If I messed anything up or it isn't etiquette please tell me I am only ordering 10 initially to make sure we both like it, then i'll order the rest! The underline is where I left out last names and addresses

The invitation:

Mr. and Mrs. Thomas                               
Request the honor of your presence
At the marriage of their daughter
Stephanie Kaye
to
Kellan Gaines                     
Friday, the twenty-fourth of August
Two thousand and twelve
at seven-thirty in the evening
The Chapel
                                              
                                             
Reception to follow

The RSVP card:
Kindly respond on or before
the twenty-third of July
M                                         
      Wouldn't Miss It For The World
       Will Celebrate From Afar
Number of Attendees        

Or email us at none@none.com

"Enclosure" business card:
For more information concerning accommodations, driving directions, RSVP options, and more please visit our website at www.none.com

Let me know how it all looks and what needs to be changed or worded different!!! Thanks!

libby2483

Your wording sounds great overall.  I would just make a few changes with capitalization (you don't have to capitalize at the start of every line) and writing out the time.  Based on what I have read on these boards before, you only want to use "the honor of your presence" if you are getting married in a church (I'm not sure if "The Chapel" is a church or not).  Otherwise, you should use "the pleasure of your company".  Honestly, most guests probably wouldn't know the difference, but if you want to be a stickler for etiquette, that is what is recommended.
Mr. and Mrs. Thomas                                
request the honor of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
Stephanie Kaye
to
Kellan Gaines                      
Friday, the twenty-fourth of August
two thousand and twelve
at half past seven o'clock in the evening

The Chapel
                                              
                                              
Reception to follow

The RSVP card:
Kindly respond on or before
the twenty-third of July
M                                          
      Wouldn't miss it for the world
       Will celebrate from afar
Number of Attendees         

VNEluvsAJB

I agree with PP. Make sure you have someone else double check the spelling of names before you complete the order.

saraschilling88

I like your wording, and unless you are going super formal, I wouldn't mind leaving it as 7:30 instead of half past seven..  Just my opinion!!