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Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!

So my big brother is getting married this year.  Never thought he would settle down but he is head over heels in love with a great woman.  I am so happy for them.  

I am going to be the best man at the wedding and have the huge task of toasting the bride and groom at their reception.  

My brother Brandon is on here and so is on here and got some great advice so I hopped on board too.  

I have written a pretty long speech (was told to aim for 5-10 minutes). I have run through it a couple of times an it averages out to about 7 minutes. I would like to know what you all think about it.

So yeah, this is the speech so far!  

I have had a healthy respect and admiration for love my entire life, my parents were great role models for that, it was just that I just never "got it".  I never understood it.  Then I got to see it happen firsthand because B met Jenn.
 When B met Jenn, my brother changed.  He stopped going out with us.  He started waiting by the phone, checking for texts and he started talking about this girl Jenn.  It scared me.  My brother was manwhore,  my wingman, my go to party guy.  I didn't want to lose that.  I didn't want anything to change.  I didn't like this Jenn. Then I met Jenn. I didn't get it at first.  I didn't see what he saw in her.  I didn't understand because she was so different from any of the girls he picked up in bars before.  I will admit that I was a shallow, ignorant fool that night but I also saw how happy my big brother was so I decided to keep my thoughts to myself. Instead, I started to pay close attention.   I started to see how he looked at her, how she looked at him.  I saw how they glowed when they looked at each other.  I saw how when she called, he got the biggest goofiest grin on his face and his voice got softer and he didn't care where he was or who was listening.  I saw how when he put his arms around her to give her a hug she closed her eyes and sighed happily.  I saw how when one moved, the other moved - like they were magnets being drawn together.  I saw how they could say a thousand words with one look.  I saw how when he was stressed, she soothed and calmed him with her voice, her touch.  I saw how when she was sick, he instantly switch to caretaker and did what needed to be done.  I read the poetry he wrote her, saw the pictures she took of him and the love expressed in both was visible to all.  I watched them sing to each other like no one else was in the room.  I saw them sneak away from the party to spend time together even though everyone was there.  I watched them steal kisses in the corner of the room when they thought no one was watching.  I saw the absolute joy on his face when he told us he was going to be a Dad.  I saw my invincible paramedic brother blanch and go weak in the knees when Jenn's pelvis separated and she nearly passed out like he had felt the pain himself.  I have watched them deal with problems, issues and emergencies with a calm, assurance that it will be ok because they are together.I have been seeing love in everything they say and everything they do. I knew that this thing B and Jenn had was special, it was something more than just love.  We all do.  Anyone who has been around them knows. Matty said this to B: This Poe quote is Jenn and you. I never knew that a love greater than love could exist, but you two have it. You have the fairytale guys. You have the real deal and you know it. You are lucky to have found it, but more importantly you are lucky to have found each other. "We loved with a love that was more than love." ~ Edgar Allan Poe Stiles said this to Jenn: You know a lot of people are calling what you and B have a fairytale, and yeah it sounds good but it doesn't fit by definition: A fanciful tale of legendary deeds and creatures, usually intended for children or A fictitious, highly fanciful story or explanation. Neither of those are true for you. What you have is an authentic and undeniable devotion and love for one another that is unyielding and unapologetic in its greatness. Labels can define you, make sure you have the appropriate label. What you have is the rawest, most pure love I have ever been blessed to be around. Cherish it, cherish each other. They are both right, it is true but there is something more to it too.  I was talking to my Dad about it and he said: What Jenn and B have is exceptional.  It is more than love, it is fusion. B and Jenn have ceased to be separate entities and have become a new better entity fused together as one.  They can no longer exist independently from one another.  I think he is right. It is scary as hell to me to think about that.  To imagine what that kind of love must feel like.  It helps me understand how hard it was for them to be apart this fall.  It makes me want what they have, but I also know that what they have is unique.  It is rare but I am glad that my brother found it.  I am glad that he found Jenn. Jenn and B.  B and Jenn.  Interchangeable but inseparable forever, for always and no matter what.  Love you guys, this is for you congratulations!  

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Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!

  • edited December 2011
    Your speech is great.  The only parts that made me wince was when you referred to your brother as a previous "manwhore" and when you said Jenn's "pelvis separated".  I would eliminate those words, in my humble opinion.
  • besidethembesidethem member
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    edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:31ac853c-f824-488b-ba99-3da62fcf654d">Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE]Your speech is great.  The only parts that made me wince was when you referred to your brother as a previous "manwhore" and when you said Jenn's "pelvis separated".  I would eliminate those words, in my humble opinion.
    Posted by mustanggoonie[/QUOTE]

    <div>I think you are right, I should eliminate the pelvis separated part.  I did a trial run on our good friend last night and he winced at that part too.  My bad.  So I will re-work that, re-post.</div><div>
    </div><div>The manwhore thing, normally I would agree with you but you see that was his nickname because well he was one, an epic one in fact.  We all called him that and he was a master pick up artist.  The only girl ever to say no to him was Jenn.  She said he was pathetic and his behavior disgusted her.  It was because of her that he changed.  </div><div>
    </div><div>I put that in there because I wanted to acknowledge how far he has come.  The guests that are coming all know this and will laugh at that part because he gets teased about it all the time.</div><div>
    </div><div>Do you think I should run that by Jenn and B?  See if they approve of the manwhore part?  It was a hit with our friend last night, it got the laugh I was going for.</div>
  • edited December 2011
    I would def ask Jenn if she would mind.  If it's not a big deal, by all means, say "manwhore".
    Glad you realize the pelvis thing has def got to go, though.  That will make everyone want to ralph!
  • edited December 2011
    Honestly, a 7 minute speech is way too long, IMO.  It would make me want to stab my salad fork into my eye, no matter how well written. 3-5 minutes would get what you want to say out there without boring the guests to tears (not from your writing, just the length itself).  After all, 10 minutes is half a sitcom script.

    I also think the first part sounds like a thinly disguised dis on Jen.  I've never met her, but the impression I got from reading it was that your brother used to pick up really hot chicks at bars and then started dating this girl who wasn't NEARLY as pretty as the girls you were used to seeing him with. I'd recommend cutting that section, which will help with the length and keep you from accidentally insulting the bride.
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  • bAEblingbAEbling member
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    edited December 2011
    A BM speech should be a minute or less, preferably in the 30 second range.  Goal: Congratulate them and ask everyone else to wish them well.  Then get off the stage.

    This is not the proper arena to roast him or his FI.  But that's JMO.
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  • RamonaFlowersRamonaFlowers member
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    edited December 2011
    Why does the speech have to be so long? I've never been to a wedding where the speeches where longer than 2 minutes, and trust me, it's great that way! 10 minutes is just going to irritate the guests.

    And like PP said, whether you meant to or not, the first part does kind of sound like you're getting a dig in at the bride for not being as attractive as the other women your brother picked up in his "manwhore" days (Very terrible choice of word, btw. Don't care if it was his nickname, the word "whore" should never be uttered into a microphone when in the same room as Nana and Great Aunt Mildred).

    For the most part it's not bad, though ... but as a guest, I'd probably be looking making a break for the bathroom or the bar if any speech lasted more than a few minutes.

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  • edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:0b4b511a-50e2-4e1b-9ba7-84d064308064">Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE]My brother was manwhore,  my wingman, my go to party guy.  I didn't want to lose that.  I didn't want anything to change.  I didn't like this Jenn.   Then I met Jenn.   I didn't get it at first.  I didn't see what he saw in her.  I didn't understand because she was so different from any of the girls he picked up in bars before.  I will admit that I was a shallow, ignorant fool that night but I also saw how happy my big brother was so I decided to keep my thoughts to myself.   Instead, I started to pay close attention.     I started to see how he looked at her, how she looked at him.   I saw how they glowed when they looked at each other.   I saw how when she called, he got the biggest goofiest grin on his face and his voice got softer and he didn't care where he was or who was listening.   I saw how when he put his arms around her to give her a hug she closed her eyes and sighed happily.   I saw how when one moved, the other moved - like they were magnets being drawn together.   I saw how they could say a thousand words with one look.   I saw how when he was stressed, she soothed and calmed him with her voice, her touch.   I saw how when she was sick, he instantly switch to caretaker and did what needed to be done.   I read the poetry he wrote her, saw the pictures she took of him and the love expressed in both was visible to all.   I watched them sing to each other like no one else was in the room.   I saw them sneak away from the party to spend time together even though everyone was there.   I watched them steal kisses in the corner of the room when they thought no one was watching.   I saw the absolute joy on his face when he told us he was going to be a Dad.   I saw my invincible paramedic brother blanch and go weak in the knees when Jenn's pelvis separated and she nearly passed out like he had felt the pain himself.   I have watched them deal with problems, issues and emergencies with a calm, assurance that it will be ok because they are together. I have been seeing love in everything they say and everything they do.   I knew that this thing B and Jenn had was special, it was something more than just love.  We all do.  Anyone who has been around them knows.   Matty said this to B:   This Poe quote is Jenn and you. I never knew that a love greater than love could exist, but you two have it. You have the fairytale guys. You have the real deal and you know it. You are lucky to have found it, but more importantly you are lucky to have found each other. "We loved with a love that was more than love." ~ Edgar Allan Poe   Stiles said this to Jenn:   You know a lot of people are calling what you and B have a fairytale, and yeah it sounds good but it doesn't fit by definition: A fanciful tale of legendary deeds and creatures, usually intended for children or A fictitious, highly fanciful story or explanation. Neither of those are true for you. What you have is an authentic and undeniable devotion and love for one another that is unyielding and unapologetic in its greatness. Labels can define you, make sure you have the appropriate label. What you have is the rawest, most pure love I have ever been blessed to be around. Cherish it, cherish each other.   They are both right, it is true but there is something more to it too.  I was talking to my Dad about it and he said:   What Jenn and B have is exceptional.  It is more than love, it is fusion. B and Jenn have ceased to be separate entities and have become a new better entity fused together as one.  They can no longer exist independently from one another.  I think he is right.   It is scary as hell to me to think about that.  To imagine what that kind of love must feel like.  It helps me understand how hard it was for them to be apart this fall.  It makes me want what they have, but I also know that what they have is unique.  It is rare but I am glad that my brother found it.  I am glad that he found Jenn.   Jenn and B.  B and Jenn.  Interchangeable but inseparable forever, for always and no matter what.  Love you guys, this is for you congratulations!  
    Posted by besidethem[/QUOTE]

    -This is way too long, the part about how much they are perfect for eachother doesn't need to go on for 30 lines.
    -The way you talk about not understanding love before you met Jenn, are you dating anyone right now that would be offended by that (if you've been dating since before you met Jenn)?
    -You need to drastically change the part about not liking Jenn, even if it is in the past tense.
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    edited December 2011
    Have you ever actually talked for seven minutes straight?  It's a really long time.  The Jungle Cruise at Disneyland is usually a little less than seven minutes.  When I was speaking competetively, anything over 3 1/2 minutes was penalized.  And I also think that the bride would probably be insulted by the first part.
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    edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special Topic Wedding BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:0b4b511a-50e2-4e1b-9ba7-84d064308064">Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE] I have had a healthy respect and admiration for love my entire life, my parents were great role models for that, it was just that I just never "got it".  I never understood it.  Then I got to see it happen firsthand because B met Jenn.   When B met Jenn, my brother changed.  He stopped going out with us.  He started waiting by the phone, checking for texts and he started talking about this girl Jenn.  It scared me.  My brother was <strong>manwhore</strong>,  my wingman, my go to party guy.  I didn't want to lose that.  I didn't want anything to change.  
    <em><u>I would avoid this term at all costs in a wedding toast.  Completely inappropriate.

    </u></em><strong>I didn't like this Jenn.</strong>   Then I met Jenn.   I didn't get it at first. <strong> I didn't see what he saw in her.  I didn't understand because she was so different from any of the girls he picked up in bars before.</strong> 
    <em><u>Any talk of not likely the bride should also be avoided especially when comparing her to women the G had picked up in bars.
    </u></em>
    <strong> I will admit that I was a shallow, ignorant fool that night but I also saw how happy my big brother was so I decided to keep my thoughts to myself.   Instead, I started to pay close attention.     I started to see how he looked at her, how she looked at him.   I saw how they glowed when they looked at each other.   I saw how when she called, he got the biggest goofiest grin on his face and his voice got softer and he didn't care where he was or who was listening.   I saw how when he put his arms around her to give her a hug she closed her eyes and sighed happily.   I saw how when one moved, the other moved - like they were magnets being drawn together.   I saw how they could say a thousand words with one look.   I saw how when he was stressed, she soothed and calmed him with her voice, her touch.   I saw how when she was sick, he instantly switch to caretaker and did what needed to be done.   I read the poetry he wrote her, saw the pictures she took of him and the love expressed in both was visible to all.   I watched them sing to each other like no one else was in the room.   I saw them sneak away from the party to spend time together even though everyone was there.   I watched them steal kisses in the corner of the room when they thought no one was watching.</strong>   I saw the absolute joy on his face when he told us he was going to be a Dad.   I saw my invincible paramedic brother blanch and go weak in the knees when Jenn's pelvis separated and she nearly passed out like he had felt the pain himself.
     <em><u>I think what is bolded can stand on its own as the entire toast - except for the ignorant shallow fool part.  This isn't about you.
    </u></em>
      I have watched them deal with <strong>problems, issues and emergencies</strong> with a calm, assurance that it will be ok because they are together.
     <em><u>Problems, issues and emergencies are not something people (especially a B&G) want to be reminded of at a wedding.
    </u></em>
    <strong>I have been seeing love in everything they say and everything they do.   I knew that this thing B and Jenn had was special, it was something more than just love.  We all do.  Anyone who has been around them knows.   Matty said this to B:   This Poe quote is Jenn and you. I never knew that a love greater than love could exist, but you two have it. You have the fairytale guys. You have the real deal and you know it. You are lucky to have found it, but more importantly you are lucky to have found each other. "We loved with a love that was more than love." ~ Edgar Allan Poe   Stiles said this to Jenn:   You know a lot of people are calling what you and B have a fairytale, and yeah it sounds good but it doesn't fit by definition: A fanciful tale of legendary deeds and creatures, usually intended for children or A fictitious, highly fanciful story or explanation. Neither of those are true for you. What you have is an authentic and undeniable devotion and love for one another that is unyielding and unapologetic in its greatness. Labels can define you, make sure you have the appropriate label. What you have is the rawest, most pure love I have ever been blessed to be around. Cherish it, cherish each other.   They are both right, it is true but there is something more to it too.  I was talking to my Dad about it and he said:   What Jenn and B have is exceptional.  It is more than love, it is fusion. B and Jenn have ceased to be separate entities and have become a new better entity fused together as one.  They can no longer exist independently from one another.  I think he is right.   It is scary as hell to me to think about that.  To imagine what that kind of love must feel like.  It helps me understand how hard it was for them to be apart this fall.  It makes me want what they have, but I also know that what they have is unique.  </strong>It is rare but I am glad that my brother found it.  I am glad that he found Jenn.   Jenn and B.  B and Jenn.  Interchangeable but inseparable forever, for always and no matter what.  Love you guys, this is for you congratulations!  
    <em><u>I would omit all of this.</u></em>


    Posted by besidethem[/QUOTE]

    I rearranged and edited what you wrote.  See if you like this:

    <p style="text-align:left;line-height:1.5em;margin:0px;font-family:'lucida grande', tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif;font-size:11px;">I knew that this thing B and Jenn have was special, it was something more than just love.  We all do.  Anyone who has been around them knows.</p><p style="text-align:left;line-height:1.5em;margin:0px;font-family:'lucida grande', tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif;font-size:11px;">I saw how they glowed when they looked at each other.  </p><p style="text-align:left;line-height:1.5em;margin:0px;font-family:'lucida grande', tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif;font-size:11px;">I saw how when she called, he got the biggest goofiest grin on his face and his voice got softer and he didn't care where he was or who was listening.  </p><p style="text-align:left;line-height:1.5em;margin:0px;font-family:'lucida grande', tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif;font-size:11px;">I saw how when he put his arms around her to give her a hug she closed her eyes and sighed happily.  </p><p style="text-align:left;line-height:1.5em;margin:0px;font-family:'lucida grande', tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif;font-size:11px;">I saw how when one moved, the other moved - like they were magnets being drawn together.  </p><p style="text-align:left;line-height:1.5em;margin:0px;font-family:'lucida grande', tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif;font-size:11px;">I saw how they could say a thousand words with one look.  </p><p style="text-align:left;line-height:1.5em;margin:0px;font-family:'lucida grande', tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif;font-size:11px;">I saw how when he was stressed, she soothed and calmed him with her voice, her touch.  </p><p style="text-align:left;line-height:1.5em;margin:0px;font-family:'lucida grande', tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif;font-size:11px;">I saw how when she was sick, he instantly switch to caretaker and did what needed to be done.  </p><p style="text-align:left;line-height:1.5em;margin:0px;font-family:'lucida grande', tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif;font-size:11px;">I read the poetry he wrote her, saw the pictures she took of him and the love expressed in both was visible to all.  </p><p style="text-align:left;line-height:1.5em;margin:0px;font-family:'lucida grande', tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif;font-size:11px;">I watched them sing to each other like no one else was in the room.  </p><p style="text-align:left;line-height:1.5em;margin:0px;font-family:'lucida grande', tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif;font-size:11px;">I saw them sneak away from the party to spend time together even though everyone was there.  </p><p style="text-align:left;line-height:1.5em;margin:0px;font-family:'lucida grande', tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif;font-size:11px;">I watched them steal kisses in the corner of the room when they thought no one was watching.  

      It makes me want what they have, but I also know that what they have is unique.  It is rare but I am glad that my brother found it.  I am glad that he found Jenn.</p>
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  • edited December 2011
    Hi!

    There is a part in there where you say something along the lines of, "I admit, I was shallow that night. But then I saw..."

    When a guy says he is shallow, that usually means he is all about looks. It made me feel like you were saying your soon to be sister in law is ugly but it stopped mattering to you when you saw how in love they are!
  • besidethem2besidethem2 member
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    edited December 2011

    hi,
    I'm acutally the Maid Of Honor of this wedding and I think that the speech is perfect the way it is. are friends and family know Jenn and Brandon, every little thing that's put in this speech is all the memories that were made trough this relationship, and knowing Jenn she wouldn't be offended and even are friends and family wouldn't be offended by it, because it's the truth.

  • edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:e4808018-cedb-41d8-be5b-57584660a34a">Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE]hi, I'm acutally the Maid Of Honor of this wedding and I think that the speech is perfect the way it is. are friends and family know Jenn and Brandon, every little thing that's put in this speech is all the memories that were made trough this relationship, and knowing Jenn she wouldn't be offended and even are friends and family wouldn't be offended by it, because it's the truth.
    Posted by besidethem2[/QUOTE]

    <div>LMAO thanks for input Dani,  For all the others, I am the bride in this wedding, Jenn.  </div><div>Chris you have written a beautiful speech.  Nothing you have written offends me because you are being honest and speaking from the heart.  That is what truly matters to me and B.  It is what we stand for.  </div><div>
    </div><div>I do think that a speech of 10-15 minutes would be quite lengthy but anything under 10 would be fine for our guests.</div><div>
    </div><div>What many of you might not realize is that our guests are our very close and personal friends.  There is no one person on our guest list who would be offended by anything stated in Chris' speech because they have all been there from day one, supporting us through every up and down along the way.</div><div>
    </div><div>As far as family being offended, the only people I can honestly see taking any offense to the word manwhore would be my parents and it is not 100% that they will remain on the guest list and even if they remain on the guest list - them being offended over that is the least of my worries because no matter what is said they will take offense because that is how they are.  </div><div>
    </div><div style="text-align:left;">Our friends are young, eclectic and very authentic as to who they are and what they are about.  We do jam sessions regularly where we listen to each other play/sing for hours at a time without words, distraction etc.  So for them to sit through one 7 minute speech would be nothing for our guests and since we don't plan on doing all the speeches back to back - I don't see it being an issue as they have nothing but respect for us and each other.</div><div style="text-align:left;">
    </div><div style="text-align:left;">Chris is also a very engaging speaker and he MCd my birthday party back in October where well over 100 people showed up.  He is charming, charismatic and has a wonderful sense of timing.  </div><div style="text-align:left;">
    </div><div style="text-align:left;">I think that all of your opinions and suggestions will be taken into consideration and he will re-work it to an extent because this is a work in progress for him.  He wants it to be the best speech possible.  </div><div style="text-align:left;">
    </div><div style="text-align:left;">I am very lucky to have such a wonderful brother (in-law be damned).  </div><div>
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  • edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:b0d8477f-6ddb-4e06-9f95-e5bb26845591">Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE]Have you ever actually talked for seven minutes straight?  It's a really long time.  The Jungle Cruise at Disneyland is usually a little less than seven minutes.  When I was speaking competetively, anything over 3 1/2 minutes was penalized.  And I also think that the bride would probably be insulted by the first part.
    Posted by aerinpegadrak[/QUOTE]

    <div>I successfully participated in (and judged) public speaking competitions on an international level throughout my high school years and we were required to create and deliver speeches anywhere from 5-20 minutes in length, depending on the level of competition and venue.</div><div>
    </div><div>The key to speech writing and effective speech delivery is to know your own audience.  What may work for one group of people will not work for another.  You wouldn't expect a group of toddlers to sit through a 45 minute speech on The Declaration of Independence nor would you expect a group of war veterans to be satisfied with a 1 minute speech on their fallen comrades. </div><div>
    </div><div>The true test of a good speaker is for them to be able to captivate the people and capture the audience's attention while delivering a speech of substance.  The longer the speech, the harder the task and the more skilled the speech writer and speaker.  </div><div>
    </div><div>Most school, local and state competitions have a shorter time limit requirement on their speeches due to limited time resources and multiple entries so the shorter the speech the quicker they can get through the participants.</div><div>
    </div><div>A good speech draws you in, keeps you there and leaves you wanting more.  A good speaker grabs your attention, keeps you entertained and leaves you smiling.  </div><div>
    </div><div>I have complete faith in Chris and his ability to pull off an amazing speech.</div>
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  • mcskatcatmcskatcat member
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    edited December 2011
    OP, this is effing ridiculous.  You came on here to ask an opinion, you got an answer that you must not have liked because then you asked others (who may or may not be real) to come back to defend you.

    If you don't want an honest answer to an honest question, then please don't ask. 
  • edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:1b0e23c5-1482-412b-8a8f-50bf15606410">Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE]OP, this is effing ridiculous.  You came on here to ask an opinion, you got an answer that you must not have liked because then you asked others (who may or may not be real) to come back to defend you. If you don't want an honest answer to an honest question, then please don't ask. 
    Posted by mcskatcat[/QUOTE]

    <div>LMFAO</div><div>
    </div><div>Yes <strong><u>your</u></strong> post is effing ridiculous.  Chris did request input on his speech and actually stated he would implement one change that was suggested from a user and would ask me if I would be offended if he said the word manwhore in his speech (since I am the BRIDE AKA Jenn), again as suggested by a forum member.</div><div>
    </div><div>Chris' last post was on January 19th!! If you took the time to actually check instead of blasting him for the remarks that Dani and I made, today.</div><div>
    </div><div>Chris wanted me to read what he wrote and asked me to tell him if I was offended by anything written.  He had asked me to do this days ago but I was unable to until today.</div><div>
    </div><div>Which is why I even came to the forum thread to begin with. Of course I am going to ask my MOH to view the thread and comment as well since she is my right hand girl in planning this wedding and will be giving her own speech at the reception!</div><div>
    </div><div>Like all of you, I am an entitled to an opinion, actually more so since this involves MY actual wedding.  </div><div>
    </div><div>I honestly believe that Chris will take the time to read and implement some changes and I stated that in my posts.  Chris truly wants this to be a good speech and right now he has some things going on in his life that make this a "back burner" item, which would be why he hasn't been posting anything here.  </div><div>
    </div><div>He promised to check with me and make changes then repost and I have no doubt that he will do that.  It is his speech and I am leaving it up to him.  I trust him completely.</div><div>
    </div><div>I think the forums here are to be a resource for people and if that is the case then it is essential for those reading the posts to consider all aspects of the question at hand, not just personal preferences, etc.  It is also helpful to READ who is posting what is said so that you are not saying that Chris is not wanting opinions or help etc when he is not even the one that has been replying!! Then to go off and accuse him of making up fake people to defend him?  That is just so off base and down right crazy!! </div><div>
    </div><div>Are the people actually involved in the wedding he is posting about NOT allowed to voice their opinions?  To me your post is out of line, effing ridiculous and not needed on a forum like this.</div>
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  • mcskatcatmcskatcat member
    500 Comments Third Anniversary
    edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special Topic Wedding BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:f679cb47-fd8b-41a8-b6ba-fe2c9d0df5c8">Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE]In Response to Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please! : LMFAO Yes your post is effing ridiculous.  Chris did request input on his speech and actually stated he would implement one change that was suggested from a user and would ask me if I would be offended if he said the word manwhore in his speech (since I am the BRIDE AKA Jenn), again as suggested by a forum member. Chris' last post was on January 19th!! If you took the time to actually check instead of blasting him for the remarks that Dani and I made, today. Chris wanted me to read what he wrote and asked me to tell him if I was offended by anything written.  He had asked me to do this days ago but I was unable to until today. Which is why I even came to the forum thread to begin with. Of course I am going to ask my MOH to view the thread and comment as well since she is my right hand girl in planning this wedding and will be giving her own speech at the reception! Like all of you, I am an entitled to an opinion, actually more so since this involves MY actual wedding.   I honestly believe that Chris will take the time to read and implement some changes and I stated that in my posts.  Chris truly wants this to be a good speech and right now he has some things going on in his life that make this a "back burner" item, which would be why he hasn't been posting anything here.   He promised to check with me and make changes then repost and I have no doubt that he will do that.  It is his speech and I am leaving it up to him.  I trust him completely. I think the forums here are to be a resource for people and if that is the case then it is essential for those reading the posts to consider all aspects of the question at hand, not just personal preferences, etc.  It is also helpful to READ who is posting what is said so that you are not saying that Chris is not wanting opinions or help etc when he is not even the one that has been replying!! Then to go off and accuse him of making up fake people to defend him?  That is just so off base and down right crazy!!  Are the people actually involved in the wedding he is posting about NOT allowed to voice their opinions?  To me your post is out of line, effing ridiculous and not needed on a forum like this.
    Posted by besidehim[/QUOTE]

    My point still stands.  Why did he bother dragging you ladies into this if he was happy with the advice he received?  Everyone told him it was too long.  Except you.  So if he wanted YOUR advice, he didn't need to come here to ask for unbiased advice from strangers. 
  • tldhtldh member
    2500 Comments
    edited December 2011
    You post on a public message board you are going to get replies whether you like it or not.  Do you honestly think, Jenn, that you are the only bride who was surrounded by only her close family and friends?  We had 30 guests at our wedding and everyone of them would have walked out of the room at a speech lasting more than 3 minutes. 
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  • mkruparmkrupar member
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    edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:f679cb47-fd8b-41a8-b6ba-fe2c9d0df5c8">Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE]In Response to Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please! : LMFAO Yes your post is effing ridiculous.  Chris did request input on his speech and actually stated he would implement one change that was suggested from a user and would ask me if I would be offended if he said the word manwhore in his speech (since I am the BRIDE AKA Jenn), again as suggested by a forum member. Chris' last post was on January 19th!! If you took the time to actually check instead of blasting him for the remarks that Dani and I made, today. Chris wanted me to read what he wrote and asked me to tell him if I was offended by anything written.  He had asked me to do this days ago but I was unable to until today. Which is why I even came to the forum thread to begin with. Of course I am going to ask my MOH to view the thread and comment as well since she is my right hand girl in planning this wedding and will be giving her own speech at the reception! Like all of you, I am an entitled to an opinion, actually more so since this involves MY actual wedding.   I honestly believe that Chris will take the time to read and implement some changes and I stated that in my posts.  Chris truly wants this to be a good speech and right now he has some things going on in his life that make this a "back burner" item, which would be why he hasn't been posting anything here.   He promised to check with me and make changes then repost and I have no doubt that he will do that.  It is his speech and I am leaving it up to him.  I trust him completely. I think the forums here are to be a resource for people and if that is the case then it is essential for those reading the posts to consider all aspects of the question at hand, not just personal preferences, etc.  It is also helpful to READ who is posting what is said so that you are not saying that Chris is not wanting opinions or help etc when he is not even the one that has been replying!! Then to go off and accuse him of making up fake people to defend him?  That is just so off base and down right crazy!!  Are the people actually involved in the wedding he is posting about NOT allowed to voice their opinions?  To me your post is out of line, effing ridiculous and not needed on a forum like this.
    Posted by besidehim[/QUOTE]

    Yeah, the forums are a resource for advice. But we're not here to validate every little thing about your wedding. I feel like "Chris" might be the imaginary person in this situation (If you and MOH aren't). Are we sure "Chris" isn't the bride writing the BM speech and asking for advice as "him". Then when "he" didn't get the advice "he" liked, the bride and MOH magically appeared to his rescue. If you're fine with what he wrote, and he's fine with what he wrote what was the point of all of thiss????
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  • bAEblingbAEbling member
    10 Comments
    edited December 2011
    You people are ridiculous.  Why post on a message board asking for opinions if you don't want to hear them?  

    Ri-dic-u-lous.  
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  • bAEblingbAEbling member
    10 Comments
    edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:dc384ecb-670f-4c32-b040-7c013721b963">Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE]In Response to Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please! : Yeah, the forums are a resource for advice. But we're not here to validate every little thing about your wedding. I feel like "Chris" might be the imaginary person in this situation (If you and MOH aren't). Are we sure "Chris" isn't the bride writing the BM speech and asking for advice as "him". Then when "he" didn't get the advice "he" liked, the bride and MOH magically appeared to his rescue. If you're fine with what he wrote, and he's fine with what he wrote what was the point of all of thiss????
    Posted by mkrupar[/QUOTE]
    Methinks you're on to something here.
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  • RamonaFlowersRamonaFlowers member
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    edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:dc384ecb-670f-4c32-b040-7c013721b963">Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE]In Response to Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please! : Yeah, the forums are a resource for advice. But we're not here to validate every little thing about your wedding. I feel like "Chris" might be the imaginary person in this situation (If you and MOH aren't). Are we sure "Chris" isn't the bride writing the BM speech and asking for advice as "him". Then when "he" didn't get the advice "he" liked, the bride and MOH magically appeared to his rescue. If you're fine with what he wrote, and he's fine with what he wrote what was the point of all of thiss????
    Posted by mkrupar[/QUOTE]


    You mean, somebody pretending to be somebody they aren't? On the <strong>internet!?!?!?!</strong> That could never happen in a million years. Wikipedia says so.

    *I felt sorry for my husband before I met him. Take a number.*
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  • edited December 2011
    <font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000">In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:dc384ecb-670f-4c32-b040-7c013721b963">Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE]In Response to Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please! : Yeah, the forums are a resource for advice. But we're not here to validate every little thing about your wedding. I feel like "Chris" might be the imaginary person in this situation (If you and MOH aren't). Are we sure "Chris" isn't the bride writing the BM speech and asking for advice as "him". Then when "he" didn't get the advice "he" liked, the bride and MOH magically appeared to his rescue. If you're fine with what he wrote, and he's fine with what he wrote what was the point of all of thiss????
    Posted by mkrupar[/QUOTE]

    </font><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><div>I don't know if he is fine with what he wrote.  He asked me to give him my opinion. Was I offended by the wording or what was said?  Absolutely not.</div><div>
    </div><div>Chris not only asked for advice but he took the advice of mustanggoonie.   I am pretty sure that he wouldn't have even READ what anyone else posted due to what is going on in his personal life right now and I know that he would not need Dani or I to come to his defense.  He is a big boy and can handle himself.</div><div>
    </div><div>If people cared to take the time to read what I posted, I clearly stated that I was in agreement with RamonaFlowers when I stated that I too believe a 10-15 minute speech would be far too long.  </div><div>
    </div><div>However, I know my guests and I know what would offend them, what their attention span is and what would be ok and what wouldn't.  I know that my guests would be left wanting and wondering WTF was up if Chris stood up and gave a 30sec-1 minute speech like what was suggested by bAEbling.  That would not be him, would not be what is expected of him.</div><div>
    </div><div>I know that when things settle down for Chris, he will log back on - read the comments and take things into consideration.  I fully expect him to make changes as he has made it clear that he intends on re-working the pelvis separating part and who knows what else.  I don't see this as his final draft of the speech by any means.  </div><div>
    </div><div>What you all fail to see is that what may work for you, your guests etc.  May not work for ours, or another bride's.  I am allowed to voice my opinion on what has been posted thus far.  I can agree with some points and disagree with others.</div><div>
    </div><div>Chris asked you for your opinions.  Chris also asked me for mine after someone here brought something to his attention.  What is so ridiculous about that? </div><div>
    </div><div>Just because you don't like what I have to say about my own wedding - you all think this entire thing is ridiculous, Chris is not real, I am not real, Dani is not real .... thank GOD B didn't post on this thread or else he would not be real  too!! OMG there is a whole lot of crazy in forums now.</div><div>
    </div><div>  </div></font></div>
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  • bAEblingbAEbling member
    10 Comments
    edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:e147ef9f-13e5-42e5-86a3-bffc5545c328">Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE]In Response to Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please! : I don't know if he is fine with what he wrote.  He asked me to give him my opinion. Was I offended by the wording or what was said?  Absolutely not. Chris not only asked for advice but he took the advice of mustanggoonie.   I am pretty sure that he wouldn't have even READ what anyone else posted due to what is going on in his personal life right now and I know that he would not need Dani or I to come to his defense.  He is a big boy and can handle himself. If people cared to take the time to read what I posted, I clearly stated that I was in agreement with RamonaFlowers when I stated that I too believe a 10-15 minute speech would be far too long.   However, I know my guests and I know what would offend them, what their attention span is and what would be ok and what wouldn't.  I know that my guests would be left wanting and wondering WTF was up if Chris stood up and gave a 30sec-1 minute speech like what was suggested by bAEbling.  That would not be him, would not be what is expected of him. I know that when things settle down for Chris, he will log back on - read the comments and take things into consideration.  I fully expect him to make changes as he has made it clear that he intends on re-working the pelvis separating part and who knows what else.  I don't see this as his final draft of the speech by any means.   What you all fail to see is that what may work for you, your guests etc.  May not work for ours, or another bride's.  I am allowed to voice my opinion on what has been posted thus far.  I can agree with some points and disagree with others. Chris asked you for your opinions.  Chris also asked me for mine after someone here brought something to his attention.  What is so ridiculous about that?  Just because you don't like what I have to say about my own wedding - you all think this entire thing is ridiculous, Chris is not real, I am not real, Dani is not real .... thank GOD B didn't post on this thread or else he would not be real  too!! <strong>OMG there is a whole lot of crazy in forums now.   </strong>
    Posted by besidehim[/QUOTE]
    Look no further than your own thread, dear.<div>
    </div><div>You don't need 8 fvcking paragraphs to make your point every time.  Funny how "Chris" and the "MOH" have the same habit...</div><div>
    </div><div>No one wants to listen to 10 minutes of how awesome you guys are.  The whole time they'll be thinking, "OMG you have to shut up I've got to eat."  They will stop paying attention.  And you will have a meltdown.  Not the kind of wedding memory you want, eh?</div><div>
    </div><div>You're awfully involved in the BM toast (toast, not speech) for me to believe any of this is real.  No real bride does that, and if you are real, you need to let it go, hon.</div>
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  • edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:651299d0-0fd0-4249-a466-6ebe77fa10dd">Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE]In Response to Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please! : Look no further than your own thread, dear. You don't need 8 fvcking paragraphs to make your point every time.  Funny how "Chris" and the "MOH" have the same habit... No one wants to listen to 10 minutes of how awesome you guys are.  The whole time they'll be thinking, "OMG you have to shut up I've got to eat."  They will stop paying attention.  And you will have a meltdown.  Not the kind of wedding memory you want, eh? You're awfully involved in the BM toast (toast, not speech) for me to believe any of this is real.  No real bride does that, and if you are real, you need to let it go, hon.
    Posted by bAEbling[/QUOTE]

    <div>If by "habit| you mean similar user IDs then yeah they would.  B's is besideher, Mine is besidehim, Chris' besidethem and Dani's is besidethem2.  All because our wedding theme is Beside You, so it is staying with the theme.  LMAO</div><div>
    </div><div>I am not involved in the speech at all other than reading what was posted.  Chris will know what I agree with and what I don't based on what other users have posted and he will make up his own mind on what makes sense and works for him.  </div><div>I trust him to do that. </div>
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  • mcskatcatmcskatcat member
    500 Comments Third Anniversary
    edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special Topic Wedding BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:a20c3fbf-87a1-4ffa-92d7-10f95379f58d">Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE]In Response to Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please! : If by "habit| you mean similar user IDs then yeah they would.  B's is besideher, Mine is besidehim, Chris' besidethem and Dani's is besidethem2.  All because our wedding theme is Beside You, so it is staying with the theme.  LMAO I am not involved in the speech at all other than reading what was posted. <strong> Chris will know what I agree with and what I don't based on what other users have posted and he will make up his own mind on what makes sense and works for him. </strong>  I trust him to do that. 
    Posted by besidehim[/QUOTE]

    And by virtue of the power vested in you, he is to do it all months before it matters at all.
  • bAEblingbAEbling member
    10 Comments
    edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:a20c3fbf-87a1-4ffa-92d7-10f95379f58d">Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE]In Response to Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please! : If by "habit| you mean similar user IDs then yeah they would.  B's is besideher, Mine is besidehim, Chris' besidethem and Dani's is besidethem2.  All because our wedding theme is Beside You, so it is staying with the theme.  
    Posted by besidehim[/QUOTE]

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  • edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:a20c3fbf-87a1-4ffa-92d7-10f95379f58d">Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE]In Response to Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please! : If by "habit| you mean similar user IDs then yeah they would.  B's is besideher, Mine is besidehim, Chris' besidethem and Dani's is besidethem2.  All because our wedding theme is Beside You, so it is staying with the theme. 
    Posted by besidehim[/QUOTE]

    Really?  FFS...


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  • aerinpegadrakaerinpegadrak member
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    edited December 2011
    If this is fake, it might be one of the saddest cries for attention I've ever seen.  If it's real, it's absolutely the saddest cry for attention I've ever seen.
    This is a neglected planning bio.
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    Sometimes I feel like people think that brides are delicate little flower princesses who get all dressed up and pretty for one special moment of their dreams, when really they're just normal people who just happen to be getting married. Things shouldn't have to be sugar-coated for grown-ass women. -mstar284
  • edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_man-here-got-speech-written-reception-need-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:e1612b6c-06df-4fb9-95c0-6e6629254bb9Post:7919f703-047d-4ee9-abdb-694995c2ceef">Re: Best man here, got a speech written for reception - need some advice please!</a>:
    [QUOTE]Honestly, a 7 minute speech is way too long, IMO.  It would make me want to stab my salad fork into my eye, no matter how well written. 3-5 minutes would get what you want to say out there without boring the guests to tears (not from your writing, just the length itself).  After all, 10 minutes is half a sitcom script. I also think the first part sounds like a thinly disguised dis on Jen.  I've never met her, <strong>but the impression I got from reading it was that your brother used to pick up really hot chicks at bars and then started dating this girl who wasn't NEARLY as pretty as the girls you were used to seeing him with. I'd recommend cutting that section</strong>, which will help with the length and keep you from accidentally insulting the bride.
    Posted by FayeValentine69[/QUOTE]
    This was my impression as well.  It felt like you were saying both you and your brother are only into hot girls so when he met her and she was ugly, you were shocked.  IMO, that's how it came across. Also, it is a little long.  It's fabulous otherwise!
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  • edited December 2011
    Well, maybe next time I will finish reading comments before posting my own.  Ha!
    Blog Planning Site Anniversary 2007- Fell down stairs, herniated 4 disks, Degenerative Disk Disease, Facet Arthritis Perfectly healthy previous to this fall. 2008- Diagnosed Hypothyroid 2010- Diagnosed severe Vitamin D deficiency and Chronic Mono 2011- Diagnosed Rheumatoid Arthritis, Carpal Tunnel, and Calcified Tendinitis in right shoulder
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