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Wedding Invitations & Paper

Invitation Check please!

It is with great joy that we

   Sukari *******
          and
  Stacy ********

invite you to share in our
        happiness
as we exchange marriage vows
on Saturday, August 17, 2013

              11:30AM

The Four Points Sheraton
10249 W. Irving Park Rd
Schiller Park, IL 60176

   Reception to follow



I know the spacing is off, Im just worried about the wording. Thanks Ladies!!!

Re: Invitation Check please!

  • I think the most formal would be:

    Half past eleven in the morning. 

    or

    In the morning at half past eleven

    Also, you should not include the zp code of the address, and you should spell everything out, such as "Road" and "West" and "Illinois"

    Honestly, this wording needs a LOT of help.  Please spend some time google invitation wording and match that.

    Good luck!

  • Ella is right about everything except the word PAST.

    You don't use the word PAST in a wedding invitation, which is inviting people to a happy event in the future.

    You use the word AFTER, like this:

    Half after eleven o'clock
  • or half after eleven in the morning
  • Thanks you all!

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