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Invitation Check please!

bride2013skjbride2013skj member
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in Wedding Invitations & Paper
It is with great joy that we

   Sukari *******
          and
  Stacy ********

invite you to share in our
        happiness
as we exchange marriage vows
on Saturday, August 17, 2013

              11:30AM

The Four Points Sheraton
10249 W. Irving Park Rd
Schiller Park, IL 60176

   Reception to follow



I know the spacing is off, Im just worried about the wording. Thanks Ladies!!!
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Re: Invitation Check please!

  • Ella and PedroElla and Pedro member
    Fifth Anniversary 500 Comments 25 Love Its Combo Breaker

    I think the most formal would be:

    Half past eleven in the morning. 

    or

    In the morning at half past eleven

    Also, you should not include the zp code of the address, and you should spell everything out, such as "Road" and "West" and "Illinois"

    Honestly, this wording needs a LOT of help.  Please spend some time google invitation wording and match that.

    Good luck!

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  • Kristin789Kristin789 member
    Sixth Anniversary 2500 Comments 25 Love Its Combo Breaker
    Ella is right about everything except the word PAST.

    You don't use the word PAST in a wedding invitation, which is inviting people to a happy event in the future.

    You use the word AFTER, like this:

    Half after eleven o'clock
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  • meg2marryshanemeg2marryshane member
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    or half after eleven in the morning
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  • bride2013skjbride2013skj member
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    Thanks you all!

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