I've been working on the wording of the wedding invitations but need some advice when it comes to wording them. As of right now my invitation is worded this way:
The pleasure of your company is requested at the marriage of
Bride's full name
To
Groom's full name
on
Saturday, June twenty-eighth two thousand fourteen at half past three in the afternoon.
My question is whether or not to stick with this wording or change it to reflect the traditional wedding invitation which
usually starts out with the bride's parents inviting guests to the wedding. I like how we have them worded but am concerned that other people who are more traditional will be offended by the wording the way they are now. Opinions please.