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Invite Opinions and Wording

pinkshorts27pinkshorts27 member
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edited August 2014 in Wedding Invitations & Paper
So I've been looking at invites and FI has changed his mind half a dozen times. Finally we found something we both agreed upon.  What do you ladies think?
Wedding is at a country club ballroom and on Dec 27th. Ballroom does have a dress code (no denim, collared shirts, no athletic clothes) and that info will be provided.


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Next: what about the below wording?
Paging  @CMGragain I need your help! :)  
I know you won't like the "Son of" line, but my parents (who are paying for the entire event) and FI requested it. I could not reject them both. So I lost that battle.



Mr. and Mrs. XX XX XX
Request the pleasure of your company
at the marriage of their daughter
Miss Pinkshorts Middle
to
Mr. First Middle Last
son of Dr. XX XX

Saturday, the twenty-seventh of December
two thousand and fourteen
at half after three o’clock

XX Country Club Ballroom
Street
City, State

Reception to Follow




ETA: Stupid Formatting

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    CMGragainCMGragain member
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    edited August 2014
    Mr. and Mrs. XX XX XX
    request the pleasure of your company
    at the marriage of their daughter
    Pinkshorts Middle
    to
    Mr. First Middle Last
    son of Doctor XX XX
    Saturday, the twenty-seventh of December
    two thousand fourteen
    at half after three o’clock
    XX Country Club
    Ballroom    Street
    City, State

    Reception to follow

    Don't capitalize anything except proper nouns. The title "Doctor" must be written out in full. You don't use a title (Miss or Ms.) without your full name. Otherwise, OK.
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    pinkshorts27pinkshorts27 member
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    CMGragain you are awesome! Thank you so much. 

    Should the room that it is in be on a separate line (ballrooom)? or is that a TK formatting issue?


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    CMGragainCMGragain member
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    edited August 2014
    I would only put the room on it if there might be confusion with multiple weddings going on in the same venue.  You can do a separate line if you want to.
    XX Country Club
    Street
    City, State

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