I am working on making my programs and I have a few questions and thought I'd have y'all check my wording to make sure everything sounds okay. The program will be a single sheet, front and back. My wording is listed below.
A few things to note and that I have questions on:
1. I'm not sure on the order of the ceremony yet since the officiant is working in the second reading and will send me the final copy later today. When he does I will rearrange the order of events to the correct order.
2. Comments on the thank you section? I feel like it might be a little wordy and there could be some grammatical errors? I really love all the content though so I'm not looking to change content but maybe clean it up a little if you think it needs it.
3. Do we need to list the ushers as part of the wedding party? I would like to list them but with the format I'm using I have to make the font pretty small to be able to add them on there. I could try using a bigger size page to fit them if they need to be on there?
4. Is the order of the wedding party okay?
(All names have been changed for privacy.)
FRONT SIDE:
Welcome
to the wedding of
Bob & Sally
05.06.2017
Hampton Valley Plantation
The Wedding Ceremony
Prelude
Processional
Opening
Reading - 1 Corinthians 13:4-7
Reading - Romans 12:1-2, 9-18
Exchange of Vows
Exchange of Rings
Prayer
Pronouncement of Marriage
Recessional
Thank You
To all of our family and friends, thank you for being here to share the first day of our marriage. Thank you for traveling both near and far to be here. We have been blessed by your gracious love, support and friendship over the years. We especially want to thank our parents, who taught us to love from the beginning.
-Bob & Sally
BACK SIDE:
The Wedding Party
Parents of the Bride
Will & Suzy Smith
Parents of the Groom
John & Kelly White
Matron of Honor
BM #1
Bridesmaids
BM #2
BM #3
BM #4
BM #5
BM #6
Best Man
GM #1
Groomsmen
GM #2
GM #3
GM #4
GM #5
GM #6
Ushers
Usher #1
Usher #2
Usher #3
Flower Girls
FG #1
FG #2
Ring Bearers
RB #1
RB #2
Officiant
Robert Lane