It's my first post here, my wedding is next weekend and my fiance and I are writing our own vows. I think I like how it sounds, but I wanted to get some opinions (timing, grammar, etc.)
Please and thank you!
For as long as we’ve been together, I’ve known you were the only one. I mean it. Everything about you is why I fell in love with you: you put your everything into what you care about, you know what people need before they know they need it, and you are both the toughest and kindest person I know. Today is the day that I wish to make a lasting promise to you. I promise to be your partner, your advisor, your lover, your comforter, your best friend, and your wife. I promise to trust, to be understanding, to have patience, to have some tolerance, and to have flexibility to change and grow as an individual and as a couple with you. And I, <my name goes here>, will no longer cry. No matter how hard things get, I vow to hang in there and never give up. But, even if I don’t cry when I’m sad, I might do it when I’m happy. That’s just the kind of person I am. From now on, I’ll do my best to support you. I will to stay with you, no matter what happens, forever and ever.
*Parts of this are quoted from one of our favorite shows