Proof my invite please

udream05

Please help me proof my invites, I think they look ok but need a 2nd eye just to make sure.  Invite and response card below... thank you!!   
 

 

KmuJmg

Do you think you need a comma between the city and state?

achiduck

I agree with PP, add a comma between city and state. Also. you have the word "join" twice in the same sentence. Not a huge deal, but I'm a stickler for things like that.

snuff9861

It bothers me personally that you have some numbers written out (like the year) and some as a symbol (the time) but that's me. Also, I think W. in the address should be written out. Other than that I think your invites are cute.

shoebie

I would change all the numbers to written, it looks like you are doing formal invites but then you do 5:00 in the after noon it should be Five O'clock in the afternoon....

udream05

thanks for your suggestions!!