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STD thoughts - my design

So I designed my STD with my Creative Memories software, do you think it's too busy?

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Re: STD thoughts - my design

  • edited December 2011
    I really like it, but I'd move the text at the top down closer to the bottom, just above your "STD" line.  It looks a little funny to me going across your FI's head.
  • edited December 2011
    I agree with Cake, I really like the design and photo you chose!
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  • edited December 2011
    I think it looks fabulous! And at first I didn't think anything needed to be change, but after reading PP I think I agree with maybe moving the scroll at the top down by the rest of the text at the bottom.  It looks great, though and a really great picture choice!
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  • aligrossaligross member
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    edited December 2011
    I agree with everyone else.... just move that text down off of the FI's head and it will be perfect! Great job!
    PS I love CM's Software too!!!!
  • graysquirrelgraysquirrel member
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    edited December 2011
    Agree with pps. The text on his head makes it look busy, but I love the design!
  • edited December 2011
    Hahaha, yeah he'd prolly appreciate that :) thanks for the suggestion!
  • edited December 2011
    I'm still learning and I am planning a meeting with my consultant to help me with some things, and yes, the "cake" part is one of the things I need help with.  I plan on making my invites (to insert on paper folds), programs, guest book, sticker designs for favors and really anything else paper related with Storybook - Love it! I really like how everything I make is one of a kind :)
  • edited December 2011

    I love the photo and the colors! Agree with PP, otherwise looks great.

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  • edited December 2011
    Just so this doesn't go any further, I'm going to be the party pooper here.  I don't think advertising these services is allowed on The Knot.  I'm waiting to hear back from KA to make sure, but.... 

    Just an FYI that I will be removing all of the posts that have any kind of advertising related business associate. sorry.

    ETA:  Vendors of any kind are not allowed on The Knot.  No business of any kind may be solicited through the forums, whether in threads or through PM. 

    I'll take this chance to remind everyone of the rules.  ThreeMarie, this is not directed solely at you, so don't be offended.

    Ladies- I know there has been an issue before of vendors directly contacting brides through PM and never posting.  If you ever have this happen, please let me know.
  • Enchanted616Enchanted616 member
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    edited December 2011
    I have to say, I think thats being a little over-the-top.  She wasn't advertising at all, just further explaining the product martiac originally posted about.  I asked.  I would say that's just being helpful.

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  • edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/local-wedding-boards_minnesota-minneapolis-st-paul_std-thoughts-design?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Local%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:81Discussion:77c77312-ab2b-477d-b525-be14be6b8b72Post:f6657223-f43d-4184-b8cc-0656fa614708">Re: STD thoughts - my design</a>:
    [QUOTE]I have to say, I think thats being a little over-the-top.  She wasn't advertising at all, just further explaining the product martiac originally posted about.  I asked.  I would say that's just being helpful.
    Posted by Enchanted616[/QUOTE]

    <div>FWIW, It wasn't me. It was KA that said no.</div><div>
    </div><div>Explaining, awesome.  Mentioning you sell it and offering your contact info- not ok.</div>
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