Invitation Wording?

misscrafty84 · July 2012

So I have been working on our invites, and I'm so lost with the wording. FI and I each have a 5 year old child from previous relationships, so I was thinking something like this

Along with their parents and children

Denise

&

Brady

joyfully invite you to share in our celebration of love and commitment

as two families become one.

I finished the RSVP cards and I'm really happy with them! I'll post pics when they come. The price of my invites went down 50% today so I'm hoping to order them since I have a coupon Groupons to use up soon!

jennipea382 · July 2012

I like it! The only thing I'd personally do differently is maybe say "together with their families" just because it's less wordy. That's just my opinion though, it doesn't sound bad the way you have it!