Hi all,
I have been working
on my vows for the last few months and I have finally got them in a place where
I feel I can share them for thoughts and opinions. We are writing our vows seperately and although we have discussed a general length format etc we have not shared any specifics about the contents.
My vows have evolved
massively since my first attempt and through coincidence more than trying they
have turned into a poem that rhymes. I quite like that they are a poem but
before I decide to keep it in this format I just want to know if they scream amateur
or are worthy for the perfect bride.
Please be brutally
honest, although I have put a lot of time and effort in to get them where they
are and I have written them from scratch, I am not a creative writer!!! I will not take your comments personally nor
will I be offended. Here goes....
On this day, the day
we choose to be husband and wife
I promise
To be your best
friend, live life to the fullest and together brave the unknown,
for as long as I can
take steps, you’ll never walk alone.
I promise
That I will make
mistakes and won’t always get things right,
But when I do ill
make amends with all of my might
I promise
To be your faithful
husband, your guardian and your equal
For as long as long
as I have fight, I’ll protect you from all evil
I promise
To travel the world
with you like we have already planned,
As we venture forth
I’ll always be there to hold your hand
I promise
To love, honour and
respect you, no matter what you may choose to do
for as long as I
still breathe, I’ll never give up on you.
On this day
I give you all that I
am, all that I was and all that I shall become
Thanks all in advanced, just over a month before we make it official