Wedding Invitations & Paper

Proof my invite and RSVP card, please?

pennyluwhopennyluwho member
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edited September 2014 in Wedding Invitations & Paper

Hello! I was hoping that someone could take quick look at my inviation wording. So the invitation style has our names on top of the invitation and is listed as "pennyluwho" pennyluwho dude" with a line in-between, and then the following:

 

Together with their families
joyfully request the pleasure of your company
as they are united in marriage
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Friday, the fifth of December
two thousand fourteen
at three o'clock

The Hotel
Town, State

 

I've also pasted the RSVP card on here. I really would rather not have the "M" listed, but am having issues with alternatives, so I'm open to suggestions! Thanks so much ahead of time.

 

RSVP Card:

Kindly reply by the twenty-fourth of November Name(s) ______________________                   ______________________ ____ accepts ____ declines 

 Edited for spacing and other issues I can't fix....

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Re: Proof my invite and RSVP card, please?

  • Just for clarifcation (and now I know I shouldn't copy and paste!):

    Together with their families

    joyfully request the pleasure of you company

    as they are united in marriage

     

    Friday, the fifth of December

    two thousand fourteen

    at three o'clock

     

    The Hotel

    Town, State

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  • Jen4948Jen4948 member
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    edited September 2014

    Just for clarifcation (and now I know I shouldn't copy and paste!):

    Together with their families

    Bride

    and

    Groom

    joyfully request the pleasure of your company

    as they are united in marriage

     

    Friday, the fifth of December

    two thousand fourteen

    at three o'clock

     

    The Hotel

    Town, State

    A few corrections.
  • Jen4948 said:

    Just for clarifcation (and now I know I shouldn't copy and paste!):

    Together with their families

    Bride

    and

    Groom

    joyfully request the pleasure of your company

    as they are united in marriage

     

    Friday, the fifth of December

    two thousand fourteen

    at three o'clock

     

    The Hotel

    Town, State

    A few corrections.
     
    **Stuck in Box**
     
    Thanks! That's helpful. Do you have any advice on the response card? I'm not sure if the Name(s) is appropriate since I am trying to avoid the "M".
     

    Kindly reply by the twenty-fourth of November<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />

    Name(s) ______________________

                      ______________________

    ____ accepts

    ____ declines

     
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  • Together with their families

    Bride's Full Name

    and

    Groom's Full Name

    request the pleasure of your company

    as they are united in marriage

     

    Friday, the fifth of December

    two thousand fourteen

    at three o'clock

     

    The Hotel

    Town, State

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  • Thanks @CMGragain and @jen4948! I really appreciate your advice!
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