Does anyone mind taking a look at this for me? I've been sick all week and when I got it this morning, all I really "see" is that it says everything that I said it should say, the way I said it should say it. Buddy is useless, he just said "I think it looks nice!"
I'm linking to it because it's hard to read small.
http://temerity-jane.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/07/KELLY-AND-PHILLIP-edit.jpgWhat I know:
1. My parents' names - my mom told me to go with what I wanted, then said go with what sounds best, then indicated a definite preference for it to be the way it is instead of Mr. and Mrs. Blah Blah Blah. She thinks it sounds more "them" to do it that way. I thought when she saw it, she might change her mind, but she didn't say anything. She's okay with it if I change it, though - what do you think?
2. The big "O" - the designer and I had talked in original conversations about replacing that with our first intials, or our first names and wedding date on the belly band like she has in some of her other styles, but I think she forgot. I will correct that. So try to ignore the Big O.
It's in charcoal ink with black envelopes.
Any critical thoughts on wording, etc, are welcome. Especially on the Important Information card - does it cover what you'd want to know?
Thaaaaanks.